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Starry Nights

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"The battle is over, but the journey isn't yet..



Hi guys!! //dies of exhaustion :iconmoesmileplz: it's been a great year and a merry Christmas ^^ I hope to see you all next year :heart: My friends and I will hopefully be starting the manga then! 

last drawing ever of the year //shot
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Pretty good. Your linearting is getting smoother, and that's always a plus.

The background is really neat, and a couple things I think can be improved are: the clouds, since they don't look like they're in perspective (they should be narrower as they extend over the mountains), there should be more clouds scattered through the sky, and the lighter gray trees in the background (on the bottom left) are on top of the darker trees, though their bases indicate that they should be further back in the background.

For the characters, Ryuu's scarf is blowing toward Arami, but her hair is blowing the other way, so that could be fixed. The lighting seems to be a bit off, since the shading on Cade indicates that the light is coming from the upper right side of the drawing, but the shading on Ryuu doesn't follow that. Also, Ryuu's scarf should be casting a shadow on Arami, so you might want to look at that. (P.s. You should try to keep the whites of the eyes white.)

There are little mistakes, but the overall drawing and idea is really nice, and keep up the good work!! <-- lol, sounding like a boss right there XD.